Hey guys, Today I was learning to make Simple, Complex and Compounds sentences. I found the writing quite easy and fun, the hardest one for me was Compound sentences because I didn't understand the "subordinate clause'. The easiest one was simple sentences because like their name it was simple sentences. I think next time I need to work on replacing for more harder words. Have a look at my word down below and if find something instresting or I need to work on feel free to comment.
I am a learner at Wesley Intermediate School Auckland, New Zealand. I am in Room 9 and my teacher was Mr Walker and is now Mrs Mundy.
Thursday, April 8, 2021
Monday, March 29, 2021
House Of The Future
Hey guys, the past week I have been asihgned to make house of the future on Tinkercard. I foudn this experience hard at first like making the doors and windows but at the end I started getting it and found a lot easier with experience. probably my next step is to do more research and try as hard as I can becuase this is probably not the best I can do. Here I have made a DLO/Poster showing you my house and explain what it made of and why.
Monday, March 15, 2021
Learning to Write in a Narrative Structure
Hey guys today I was learning to write in a Narraitive structure, Here is my work.
LO: Write in a Narrative Structure
Succes Critera:
1. Contains an introduction that introduces the main Character and Setting
2. Contains a problem and soloution
3. Coclusion that wraps up the story
4. Contains Adverbs, Verbs and Adjectives to create imagery
Plan:
Where: Paris
When: 20/6/25
Who: Zack, Mr. Harry D, Jake Steffy
What: School Trip
Problem: Because he has to go to a special big toilet because when he poops he poops real big
Soloution: Jumps into a dumpster
Writing:
I'm in Paris the beautifil city of pastries with y class for a special trip. My name is Zack Troy and I love pastries, their so fluffy, sweet with the aroma as sweet as honey. we're on our way to a special 5 sar resort Hotel because our school is kind of rich. First we checked in, and made our way to our room I got to share a room with my best friend Jake Steffy. We ordered room service and the waiter was especially wellbehaved and nice.
We ordered macarons a special oreo looking soft, cookie sandwitch. It looked as if we were in Heaven. We also ordered some ice cream with a shiny coat of of caramel sauce. Then it began my rare pooping disease, "GURGLE" Jake jumped up starteled and asked "what wrong""its happening I need to get o a toilet I mean dumpster immedialy because a toilet willl get clogged because when I started it won't stop for a while" I replied excataticly. I ran as fast as cheetah but found I wasn't going to make it I found a window and saw the dumpster.
Knowing the risk I knew what I had to do I jumped, Pulled my pants down, Aimed and let it rip. The poo helped slow down and land safely on the edge I stayed there for 15 minutes hoping no one would come by, no one did after I finished I found some clothes on someone's line and wipe my bottom. Then headed back to my room no one had realised I had gone because friend did his best to keep them busy, man I was lucky to have such a great friend.
The next day we went around looking at the Eiffel Tower, Louvre Pyramid and many other great places. We went to the airport and flew back as we flew I couldn't but wonder If that dumpster would become a famous exhibit.
Reflection:
I found this work really fun when I was writin it because I could write freely and it just made me happy. It was quite easy because I really liked writing. I think I need to work on more descriving words and more punctuation. My next steps are to probably add more describing words and puncation and also to make it a little bit more Formal.
Wednesday, March 10, 2021
Algebraic Equations
Hey guys, today we have been learning about Algebraic equations and I have made a poster showing you what it is and there is a question if you want to have a go aswell.
Friday, March 5, 2021
Lockdown Online Learning
Hey guys since lockdown I had to learn from home, witch I loved for some reason probably because I could just learn from my bed and I could it whatever. But I still did the work, It was actually quite conveinet for me but one problem was the Internet sometimes something happens. Apart from that I enjoyed my lockdown heaps of learning and TV was great. Here is one of the Reading tasks I did ( I did 4 by the way).
I couldn't embed on here so here is the LINK
Monday, February 22, 2021
Aotearoa History
Hi, Today we were learning about the history of our Aotearoa. Heres is a DLO of my work that explains a little bit about Moa's an exctinct bird. I found this intresting finding out about are past my favourite part was finding about the Moa and exctint bird. I would like to learn more about the history of Aotearoa.
Wednesday, December 2, 2020
T Shaped Literacy
Hey Guys, Today I was learning about T shaped poetry and identifying language features like adverbs, verbs and adjective adn we also made or own pictures using thoose words and a site to make images into png images. But we haven't made an of our own poems yet, still here is my slide showing some poems I've been reading and Identifying.